Same story, CONT’D:
All I can say about the art here is that I think it sucks. I mean, she’s got no right arm on page 2. Dude has no eyes and a disgusting large tongue being shown off. She seems out-of-whack on the top of page 4.
Hey wait… there’s something to be learned from this. I mean, why not erase the eyes in some of your panels? It’s not a bad idea.
I do think there’s always something to be said for an artist pushing the abstraction/object-less/ethereal panels in a story. I like to see that boundary pushed.